Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Thesis


















My thesis story revolves around a story about a teenage boy and his hamster. Hamper the hamster is excited to hear Mike come home and runns over to the side of the cage. His happy expression is quickly wiped from his face when he discovers that mike has brought a guest and didn't pay any attention to him. He gets sad and has a flash back of when they were in the bathroom doing mike's hair. Mike reaches down and gives hamper his own little mohawk and they laugh together. He snaps back to reality and gets determined and waves his little arms around. The two are too busy watching TV. Hamper then grabs some flags and wave them around. still nothing. Then he jumps around with pom poms and does a back flip. still nothing.


He then climbs his running wheel and puts on a blind fold, puts out his arms and dives into his little water dish. Mikes guest malissa whips her head around; very irritated, and glares at hamper all soaking wet. He shakes dry and his fur makes him look like a puff ball.

melissa turns her attention back to the television. Few seconds later, melissa is hit in the head with something. then out of no where she is being hit with food pellets. She covers her head with her hands, then hampers wheel hits her in the head, knocking her to the ground. Out raged, melissa leaves the room and slams the door. Mike looks back at hamper and he tries to look innocent. Mike has an angry face that stares down his hampster. Hamper then makes a puppy dog face and make his eyes tear up. Mike makes a cooing noise and hugs his little hampster friend that he could never be mad at.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Good brainstorming! OK, next step: you've got the basis of the story--lost love rediscovered (teenager remembers how much he loves his special pet). Continue the brainstorming... do you really need the girl? Mike could just be getting too old to appreciate his little friend. Hamper throwing pellets is funny, but it's predictable. What if Mike comes into the room and tosses his jacket onto Hamper's cage--this has become a habit. Everyday, jacket on cage. Day after day... Hamper plans his revenge... a strategically placed blunt.
Show your story to as many people as possible... show it to Tom R. and get his feedback. But for right now, draw some pictures of Hamper!
Also, check out the short film "Big Buck Bunny"

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